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Chapter five

Band: Royz.
Characters: Subaru, Koudai, Kuina and mentions of others.
Main pairing: Subaru x Koudai.
Sub-pairings: Subaru x Kuina, Subaru x Tomoya, Subaru x Kazuki.

Rating: NC-17.
Genre/type: Canon, adultfic, erotica, PWP-fic.
Warnings: Yaoi/homosexuality/slash, NC17, lemon/explicit sex, sexual situations, consensual, serious PWP, WAFF/fluff.

Information about Subaru here.
Information about Koudai here.
Information about Royz here and here.
'Just another Sunday Morning' archive page here.

Relative time in play: Anytime within the last six months or so.
Relations: Not related to any other plays of mine.

Summary:
Subaru had often woken up in bed with either Kuina or Tomoya after a drunken night, and once or twice with Kazuki too, but he had never tried waking up with Koudai at his side before. They had of course fooled around many times in the past, both on and off stage, but this was different indeed. It probably should have felt weird, then, but it didn’t. It definitely didn’t…

And besides, they had obviously had sex the night before, and Koudai was lying wrapped around him now, naked skin flushed against naked skin, so any lines and limitations of friendship between them were long ago blurred and forgotten anyway, right? So, what was the use of suddenly feeling shy or embarrassed anyway? Why not take advantage of the situation, and have that beautiful body once more before reality came knocking?




~o~

OBS: This is not written in some alternative universe where everyone's gay and it's just the way of the world. This is supposed to be one-hundred percent realistic, and, though I never write bands to have more than one, maybe two gays members... well, I figured the gayest band in the world (which they totally are!<3) would be allowed to break the rule and have a full cast. Yes, I truly believe one of the criteria for joining Royz in the first place is to be as gay as the day is long... XD

~o~


Subaru watched with an almost awestruck expression as Koudai moaned out deeply then, in that seductive baritone, painted eyelids fluttering closed as long, black lashes fanned out over the rounded upper part of rosy cheeks, and delicate eyebrows furrowed sensually in a look of utter bliss at the intrusion.

God… He looked so indescribably beautiful, like an angel of sin, with those pristine features washed over with a soft pleasure only tinted ever so lightly with the inevitable discomfort of the slender digit moving inside of him; filling him and pushing at his warm, soft walls in preparation for something much bigger and better, and the way fleshy, sweaty thighs fell even more to the sides then, in soft, welcoming surrender, had the younger man shivering too, moaning too.

Aaagnhh… yes… fuck yes…

Though the crimson-haired bassist was still deliciously tight around him, it was obvious he was also still fairly loose and stretched from the night before, and Koudai made no real mention for Subaru to stop, to pause, when he was finally fully buried in the alluring heat. His knuckles had barely pressed against the pulsating ring of muscles before the slender fingers fisting in his hazel brown hair tightened and he was pulled down into a deep, passionate kiss that, along with the slicked heat now smothering so associatively around his finger, made him almost topple over in desperate arousal.

God… To think that he was finally inside of Koudai

Beautiful, amazing, attractive Koudai…

Move,” the older man breathed huskily in between the series of hard, fast kisses that followed then, the ones that let them draw just enough shallow breaths in between to continue in an endless stream; again and again and again crushing their swollen lips together in bruising heated touches, and yet not enough to stop their lungs from aching painfully in erratically heaving chests, “God, please move…

Though Subaru’s pleasure-hazed mind was too far gone in the euphoria and excitement of it all to connect actual meaning to the words, to the request, his hand started moving all on its own in the next second anyway, retracting merely half the length before thrusting the slender digit back in with a delicious wet slapping sound. A moan, breathy and hot, instantly echoed into his mouth at the collision, vibrating against his fuzzy tongue, and Subaru felt his own cock twitch and jump against the side of Koudai’s hip, his every cell screaming with the need to just draw out and replace his finger with it already.

God… Had anyone ever turned him on like this before? - If so, he definitely couldn’t remember it just then… Only Koudai. Koudai moaning; Koudai writhing; Koudai responding to his every kiss with equal fervor and breathtaking passion; Koudai clenching so delicately around his slicked finger with every movement…

Subaru soon build up a fast rhythm of thrusting in and out of that gorgeous body; deeper, faster, slightly harder; continuously pushing at those impossibly soft walls, feeling them slowly mold to his shape, feeling them slowly yield to make room for him, to encourage him, to drown him inch for inch in a lasciviously sinful promise of what to come when they finally moved on.

More…

It was breathed against him one of those times they broke apart, warm breath scolding over his painfully swollen lower lip in the barely-there space between them, and the crimson-haired man grounded down in the same second, rolled his hips, meeting the thrust of the finger in a way that was so dirty and so arousing it made Subaru crush their lips together yet again, before either of them had had the time to draw more than one shaky breath to refill their dying lungs.

God… It wasn’t enough. Even adding not one, but two fingers to the first, reveling in the way the other man thrashed in pained pleasure beneath him, against him, against the heated kiss and pink tongues twining and untwining, it wasn’t enough. He needed more. God, he needed more…

Aaaghn…

Koudai pulled away from the umpteenth kiss, abruptly, as his entire body jolted in a ray of techi-colored pleasure when Subaru finally located that bundle of nerves inside of him that would make stars blur his vision. He moaned out in juvenile triumph at his find, and the heavenly reaction it earned him, and, though those slender fingers now had the most painful hold on his hair, mindlessly all but ripping out the sensitive strands, Subaru cocked his head down all the same and attacked the beautiful length of the other man’s neck with sloppy, open-mouthed kisses.

F-fuck…

Oh… fuck…

Angling his movements now, so he could keep brushing that sweet spot over and over again, so he could continue to draw more of those fevering moans and delicious gasps from pink, pouty lips with every thrust, Subaru soon bit down on Koudai’s neck again. And then again, and again, sucking, licking, creating crimson bruise upon crimson bruise along the great vein running just below the milky skin as he reveled in the way it jumped and pulsated desperately against every touch of his devious lips, and against every bite of his sharp teeth.

It would have consequences of course; Koudai would be undisguisable hues of blue and black when they settled in a couple of hours, barely a patch of skin on his neck and collarbones left untouched, but it didn’t matter. How could it matter when their creation obviously felt almost as good to the older man as the adroit fingers continuously thrusting into his body, caressing his vibrating prostate over and over and over again? How could it matter in this little world where only the two of them existed, where only the two of them mattered?

Aaaaghn…

Subaru…

God, Subaru…

Even if Subaru had wanted to stop now anyway, to repent, he doubt the crimson-haired bassist would have even let him – the slender fingers in his hair were clutching hard, pulling, pressing, urging him closer even when he bit down the hardest he possibly could without actually breaching the fair skin. Contradictive as it was, the adroit digits almost loosened every time he bite down, and in return tightened every time he pulled back, again and again guiding him to continue, silently pleading, silently begging for more.

And who was he to say no?

One more?

It was meant as a question really, but it came out more as a whine, a whimper, a desperate plea for negative confirmation. Subaru’s three lubricant-slicked fingers were now sliding in and out of the heat with fairly little resistance meeting them; the tight ring of muscles was now looser against him, around him, eagerly welcoming him with every sensually slicked collision as he scissored against it, against the soft walls of muscles engulfing him - and as always he couldn’t help but be a little amazed at how a human body would give; how it would accommodate so eagerly at the promise of pleasure and sin.

Oh God, no…” Koudai chuckled breathlessly, trying hard to stifle another one of those amazing baritone moans that continued to rustle off his kiss-swollen lips like honey, though it only caused his breath to hitch again, and his rounded cheeks to flush further. His body was aglow, fevering, his perspiration-slicked skin bruised to the deepest shade of crimson, and he was all but trembling in the painfully drawn-out build-up, the whirlpool of arousal and desire, and the need for more, for release, for anything. “Please…

Thank God…” Subaru chuckled relieved, with an exasperatedly cute exhale of breath, and he claimed those beautiful lips in yet another hard, heated kiss as he scissored his fingers one last time against the lascivious heat and softness. Then, when the passionate kiss broke, he finally retracted the three slender digits, too, a thin thread of lubricant connecting them for an endless second before it snapped into nothing but glinting diamond droplets on the canvas of the black sheets. He dried his fingers off in them, too.

I need to be inside of you…” the young vocalist added with a wry smile then, almost apologetically thought not quite so, and he pushed up and crawled in between those fleshy thighs, the slicked warmth of them almost scorching his sides. He settled there, on his knees and shins on the ruffled sheets, and reached for the condom on the night stand.

And I’m the impatient one?” Koudai cooed breathily in between the heavy pants still making his straining body tremble in the most sensual of ways, his impossibly black eyes glinting with mischief as he smirked at him over the plane of beautiful ivory skin.

Subaru rolled his eyes at the tease and ripped the silver square open effortlessly. Then he rolled the thin, pre-lubricated rubber unto his own straining cock, moaning out in the pleasure of his own touch – any touch – to the hard, weeping flesh, before he pushed forth and covered that gorgeous body with his own. “Aren’t you?” he whispered darkly against Koudai’s swollen lips in the same second he snapped his hips and bruised their erections together in the most pleasurably hurtful of ways, “- Impatient?

Fuck!” the crimson-haired bassist gasped sensually at the jolting touch, and his fleshy thighs instantly clamped against the younger man’s slender sides, pressing him closer still, as bodies molded together in perspiration-slicked warmth. Koudai was no less hard now than he had been before after all, when Subaru’s mouth had been on him, no less leaking and throbbing against that femininely flat stomach, so it was definitely impressive if he wasn’t the least bit impatient by now…

Yes, I am,” Koudai admitted with a warm smile then, when his delicious tremor of soft, pained pleasure ended moments later, and he reopened his eyes as his hands snaked up to wrap around the smaller part of Subaru’s curved back, though no nails sunk into the marred skin this time as the touch was softer for a moment, sweeter, “I need you inside of me, too.

Yet again Subaru’s silver-threaded lips tugged apart in that blinding toothpaste smile their fans knew and loved, and he felt his entire being leap away in adoration and warmth. In spite of everything that had already happened, he still couldn’t phantom what was about to happen – that after three years he would finally get to feel the warmth of that androgynous body; the pull and softness of those slicked walls around him, drowning him, taking in everything of him until he came undone in the mind-blowing pleasure only this very act could summon – and he stalled for just a second then, as he leaned down and caught those beautiful lips in a softer, deeper kiss.

God… If Koudai sensed his state of overwhelm in that moment Subaru didn’t know, but the beautiful man soon let one hand trail from his back as impish tongues met on the halfway between painfully swollen lips, just gently lapping at each other, caressing, tips teasing against teeth and roof tops in turn. The fingertips, slightly calloused in the most exciting of ways, caressed down over the sensitive skin of his side then, almost making him shiver against the kiss at the ticklish sensation, before it snaked in between their sweaty bodies to wrap around his condom-clad cock.

Fuck… A soft moan, hot and heavy, instantly tore from the beautiful vocalist and vibrated against their infused lips, their twining tongues, as those dexterous fingers stroked him once, twice, before guiding him down between fleshy globes to the tight ring still pulsating from the thorough work of his fingers, clenching and unclenching against the tip the very second they came in contact.

Please…

Koudai’s pink lips curled against his when they were finally forced to break apart, both of them trembling from every sensation of the ethereal moment, and the sculpted hand still resting on the smaller part of Subaru’s back pressed lightly, urging him forth while the other held his cock positioned at the tight ring.

Please, Baru…

The alluring heat was emanating against him, even through the protective shield of the rubber condom, and the young vocalist didn’t need the verbal request to proceed – his mind had barely kicked into gear from the heavenly kiss before he pushed forth by pure instinct, against the adroit fingers hold him, guiding him, all but snapping his hips in a leap of such indescribable desire.

Aaaaghn….

Koudai moaned out loudly and threw his head back into the sheets when Subaru finally entered him, drowning inch after inch in that blessed tightness no woman could possibly ever rival. The hand holding the base of his cock instantly slipped out then, from between them, and up to join its twin, and this time the sharp nails did sink into his skin, deep and hard, probably opening up the crimson lines from last night – though Subaru didn’t even notice as he was all but dying the most perfect death of such heat and tightness engulfing him, smothering him, almost pulling his orgasm from him just by that.

Oh… God…

Fuck…” the beautiful youth cursed under his breath when he finally stilled, almost completely buried, and he trembled in delicious pleasure as he let himself fall for a second, as he let his entire weight rest down on the other man’s equally tremor-ridden body, and he pressed his swollen lips to the salt-slicked crook of Koudai’s marred neck, “Fuck, Kou…

It was literally like the world stopped turning for a moment; like nothing else matter than this lazy Sunday morning, this small, dingy hotel room and their interlocked bodies, their hearts racing up against each other from behind thin ribcages and their breathing, ragged, heavy, laced with such carnal pleasure; the basest of sins…

Move,

Koudai’s fleshy thighs loosened against Subaru’s slender sides seconds later, falling to the sides on soft sheets as he arched up against the younger man’s body in a sensual hitch of breath.

Oh, God… please… please move…

Subaru pushed up with a pleasure-drunken smile then, on his elbows, and he claimed those quivering lips in a deep, passionate kiss as he instantly did as requested and started rolling his hips. The movements were slow, firm, his ass bopping up and down in sensually rounded motions as he retracted just a few inches before pushing in again; again and again and again seeking into the blessed abyss as he found a rhythm that somehow seemed to naturally fall in synch with the pace of their kisses, the deepness and passion of lips molding and melting together. God…

The heavy, heated air of the small hotel room soon filled with the delicious wet slapping sounds of hips meeting ass cheeks in toe-tingling collisions, and the continuous echo of moist, deep moans half-strangled and smothered by the stream of endless kisses that fought hard to override the need for oxygen, and black-painted nails clawed over skin, thighs quivered and chests arched fast against each other in ragged, broken motions as pink tongues battled for dominance and pleasure.

Deeper, Subaru…

Koudai’s baritone voice was barely above a whisper, breathy and hoarse beyond recognition, and his onyx eyes were swimming dangerously when they finally broke apart to look at each other, to refill their abused lungs with much-needed oxygen lest the world blackened completely before their eyes and they would fall into oblivion.

God… Subaru took a second to look at the unearthly sight of his best friend lying there beneath him; long blood red hair fanning out over black sheets in the most beautiful contrast, like the first ray of the newborn sun breaking the black night sky, and cheeks tinted with heady arousal and lips – oh those lips – looking as deliciously swollen and plump as his own felt, bruised the color of wild cherries and slicked with glistening saliva. “I don’t want to hurt you…” the young vocalist whispered in the same kind of breathy voice, hard pants breaking every word in two in the most sensual of ways.

Koudai had bottomed for him last night too after all, which meant he inevitably had to be somewhat sore today, and bottoming several times in a row did take its toll on one’s body. Subaru appreciated that, as any gay man would, so he was indeed holding back; he was refraining from drowning the last inch of his –especially for someone of his petite frame– quite impressive size inside his friend’s intoxicating body.

This was already more than enough to make his every nerve ending tie knots on itself anyway, in such intense, perfect pleasure, and, though it was of course insanely arousing to have your entire length drowned inside another’s body, in another’s heat and tightness, he definitely didn’t need it. Koudai was already giving him all he had ever dreamt of and---

The crimson-haired bassist suddenly laughed out softly, as if he could read Subaru’s thoughts just then, somehow, and found them too cute to handle; a breathy, drunken laughter of pure amusement that only intensified the light of warmth and pleasure flickering in his shadowy eyes, and the beautiful flush on his rounded cheeks.

“You really don’t remember last night, do you?” he asked with a playfully wry smirk, his narrow shoulders trembling lightly in happiness even after the melodious laughter died out a moment later, and then he moved both hands up to caress up and down Subaru’s curved back just once, sweetly, “Sit back for a moment.”

The young vocalist gave off a cutely confused hum at the request, but did as he was asked, pushing up to sit completely on his knees and shins on the ruffled sheets. His delicate hands automatically went to those femininely fleshy thighs then, fingertips slipping over the perspiration-slicked skin in the most arousing of ways, but before he could move in this new position, before he could start thrusting as he figured the other man wanted him to, Koudai’s hands laced over his and gave them a squeeze, to stop him.

No,” the redhead breathed out with a dark smile as he shook his head softly from side to side, “Watch me,” he bid and, when Subaru nodded quite dumb-fooled, Koudai drew a deep breath and fisted his hands in the ruffled sheets on either side of his body. Then he raised his knees up, to plant his feet flatly on the mattress on either side of Subaru’s calves, for support and leverage, and the younger man watched with his jaw almost comically dropping as that gorgeous man slowly started moving in the next moment.

Aaaah…

Koudai’s shoulders were pressed hard down into the mattress, and the taut muscles of his flat stomach flexed visibly as he kept his body straight, straight as a board, so he could move up and down unhindered. His thighs quivered lightly from the strain of holding his own weight up like that, prominent hip bones protruding beneath the ivory skin with every slow movement, and yet somehow Koudai made it look sensually graceful and effortless as he began literally riding himself on Subaru’s cock.

Fuck…

The hips moved up and down a couple of times, shallowly, merely sinking halfway down unto the slicked hardness before sliding off it again, and then, without warning, Koudai suddenly rolled his hips, circling them, and before Subaru could do much of anything – he was still sitting there looking like a cute idiot with his mouth dropped in utter astonishment, truth be told – the crimson-haired man grounded down hard, taking in every last inch of his length in one go; drowning him in a fit so tight and warm Subaru almost toppled over in the ravenous pleasure of it all.

Oh, God, Kou…

In spite of the irony of it, Subaru had never been a very vocal lover, and yet he literally cried out in the overwhelm of it all just then; of the unbelievable pleasure, and the sight of Koudai riding himself on his cock like that (which was, without a shred of doubt, the most arousing thing anyone had ever done to him - EVER), and he even proceeded to whimper, too; a deep, sensual sound of the utter desire that almost made him crawl out of his own skin.

Aah…

With painted eyelids closed tightly shut, and swollen lips parted in deep, honeyed moans of pleasure and pain intermixed, Koudai took just a second to let himself adjust to the feeling of Subaru’s full size finally inside of him. Then he raised himself up again, fleshy thighs trembling just as before, and taut muscles flexing beneath a thin sheen of crystalline sweat; up and up until only the head was left behind the tight ring - and then down again. Down in one fluid, hard motion, once again forcing every last, engorged inch into his own body, filling himself to the brim as his entire face washed over with voluptuous sin and pained pleasure.

Aaaahnnn…

Koudai’s long neck was arched up in a beautiful bow as his head stayed pressed into the sheets for leverage, the great vein thumbing visibly beneath the crimson-bruised skin, and his cock, heavy, hard and leaking against the lower part of straining stomach muscles, literally jumped in excitement with every movement. Again, and again; up, then down, up, then down; and Subaru watched with his blood boiling in the sensory overload of that gorgeous body working so hard to pleasure itself on his cock, clearly taking him in solely for its own gratification; riding itself with every thrust angled to hit the bundle of nerves deep inside that only made those famous thighs quiver harder and the delicious baritone moans intensify.

Aaagh…

Fuck…

God… Nothing had ever looked sexier to him than Koudai did just then, no one, and Subaru’s mind instantly reduced to a screen of white noise as the feral coiling in the pit of his stomach increased with a fiery intensity, the whirlpool of his building desire, his pending release, faster and faster as he watched with hazel brown eyes blackening over with such ravenous lust it rivaled anything he had ever known before in himself, in anyone.

Aah… Aaahnng…

His nails sunk into those fleshy, straining thighs mindlessly, but they were neither guiding nor forcing the movements; Subaru was in a spell; so caught up in the delicious indecency of it all, the lascivious sin and the breathtaking pleasure, and he would have been happy to stay right there and let the gorgeous man ride them both into the orgasms of a lifetime – which, with the unrivaled, fastly building arousal he was feeling now, wouldn’t take long at all, really.

God…

Aaagh……

Oh, God, yes…

But, it seemed Koudai had other plans though, as the gorgeous redhead only continued like that for a few more moments before he suddenly stopped, after he had sunk down yet again, drowning every last inch of the hard, rubber-clad erection inside his tight, hot body. Then he reached up, taking hold of Subaru’s hands as he all but yanked the beautiful vocalist down over him again, bruising their bodies together in a hard collision. “Now, fuck me,” he growled sensually the second their face leveled, and onyx eyes glinted with mischief as he caught Subaru’s lips in a hard, deep kiss that instantly took his breath away.




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Please leave a comment and make me happy~ ヽ(*´ω`)ノ゚ ♥


I'm so sorry for the long wait on this, but I've been sick (and still am!), so I just haven't had the mind or energy to really write... T___T To make up for making you wait for five long days I wrote an extra long chapter though, with ~a lot~ more action than the previous ones, so I hope I'm forgiven?<3 ~

Oh, and btw., Koudai's move at the end... it's something I've always wanted to write, because to me it really is one of the sexiest sights in the world, just like that... *o* But I don't know if I described it well enough? Was it intelligible enough to create a vivid imagery?^^;



Oh, and another little KouD x Subaru fanservice treat while you wait for the next chapter;  here~~ because they are so cute together<3

Date: 2013-01-19 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xadowangel.livejournal.com
i need a bloody cold shower now but i can't coz i'm waiting for my turn on the court...we're playing tennis ^^

But you left me gaping like an idiot much like subaru lol. That was sooooo hawt ufffff!!!

Date: 2013-01-19 11:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Oh, that sounds so nice! Are you having fun with your family and the new couple~?^^

Awww, you really think so? XD Thank you so much~ :*
Who wouldn't sit gaping like an idiot if that was done to them? *o* Tomo definitely would if Kuina did~ XDDD

Date: 2013-01-19 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
But was the description intelligible then? Because I'm not sure... T___T I already have the picture in my mind after all, so it paints a vivid image for me, but...?

Date: 2013-01-19 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
THAT.WAS.JUST.TOO.HOT.FOR.WORDS.

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You killed me>.<*

Date: 2013-01-19 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much! ; _____ ; I'm so glad you liked it <3 I was really afraid this would not be sexy enough, or sensual enough, but I'm glad you think so <3

Date: 2013-01-19 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaiser1103.livejournal.com
Thank you for the extra long chapter!
Koudai is so gorgeous!

Date: 2013-01-19 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
You're very welcome^___~ I figured an extra long chapter would be nice after all those evil cliffhangers and the wait~

And he is, isn't he? *o* I didn't mean to, but I think I almost made him too perfect, too idolized, to goddamn amazing... XD Subaru was really my main focus, but now... well, it have to control myself not just to write about the wonders of Koudai in every chapter... XD;

Date: 2013-01-19 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaiser1103.livejournal.com
They are all wonderful people!
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Date: 2013-01-19 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
I will try not to make you wait too long<3~

Date: 2013-01-19 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thanks a lot for continuation and please recover! I will wait for the following chapter! You the best author!

Date: 2013-01-19 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much<3 You're too kind to me^^;

Date: 2013-01-19 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pigurou.livejournal.com
OMO OMO OMO I can't even say it in words
thank you for your extra long chapter, but you shouldn't force it if you can't
get well soon ^^

Date: 2013-01-19 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you - I will take it easy for a couple of days and try to get well<3 Thank you for worrying about me^^

And thank you for reading and commenting - your comments mean a lot to me<3 ^^

Date: 2013-01-20 11:54 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This was so hot! And the way Koudai's riding himself is just... the sexiest thing I ever read!!! I can't wait for the next chapter < 3

Hugs.

Date: 2013-01-20 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much <3 ^^ Oh, and you really thought so? That makes me so happy!<3

Date: 2013-01-20 11:56 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Excuse the Author-san! You can't help me?How it is possible to wish happy birthday on Ameba?

Date: 2013-01-20 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Sorry, I don't know...^^;

Date: 2013-01-20 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eimininja.livejournal.com
Omg that ending...oh Koudai... I love how sweet he is through the whole thing, and now this, too sexy.

Date: 2013-01-21 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Awww, I'm glad you liked it<3 ^-^ As I've mentioned before, I was afraid it wouldn't be sensual enough, the last part, but... yeah, I just had to write it, because I think it's sooo sexy (and would fit Koudai so well)<3 I like how he's almost guiding Subaru~<3

Date: 2013-01-21 06:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faewitchkins.livejournal.com
It took me an extra day to finally be able to read this. Kept getting interupted when I attempted yesterday and had to stop and so now finally tonight I was finally able to sit and read and Lords have mercy!!! I adore Subaru in this and find Koudai sexier than any one has a right to be but THIS!! holy cowbells batman!!

The build up was so damn perfect, the sex itself exquisite, and then Koudai riding Subaru just toppled the world right off its axis! and his dominant streak coming through telling Subaru to fuck him was just so freaking sensually sexy... Those few brain cells I recovered were beyond fried reading this.

Your way with words and descriptions is par excellence! The description of Koudai's movements was delicious and very easy to visualize... it came across smoothly so don't worry. I can only imagine the dumbstruck look on Subaru's face and bet he's sorry he doesn't remember the night before ;)

Another fabulous and sexier than hell chapter! I am soooo glad I found you. I just love reading your work :)

(btw ~ did you know that this fic is being promoted on tumblr under Royz' tags? Just thought I'd let you know you're getting pimped xD)

Date: 2013-01-21 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked Koudai in this (and Subaru too, of course<3); I hadn't planned on him changing from being all sweet, caring and cute to being all dominant and sexy all within one chapter, but suddenly he just took the reins and I just had to let him xD And Subaru's being almost too innocent, all overwhelmed and awestruck, isn't he?~ My poor baby, too caught up in getting the experience of a lifetime xD

And I'm so glad you thought the imagery of that move was easy to visualize~ <3 :) I was afraid it didn't come across, or that, if it did, it would be too... grotesque... vulgar... porn-like... and not in keeping with the sensual tone I wanted in this^^; But I'm so glad you don't think so <3

And I'm so happy to have you as a reader<3 I'm pretty sure I could be completely happy just writing fics for you solely, with all those sweet, encouraging words you shower me with... ;)

And... oh my... really? xD Can you maybe send me a link? I definitely want to see that xD I'm often stalking tumblr (though I don't have a user), looking at Royz tags etc., but I haven't seen my story there^^; But that's pretty cool~ Guess I'm not the only one who's been waiting desperately for a Royz NC-17 fic then...^^;

Date: 2013-01-21 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Oh, I just found it! XD (and thank you for mentioning Royz and tumblr tags... I've been caught there all morning scrolling XD)

Date: 2013-01-22 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faewitchkins.livejournal.com
Ah well you know those muses, from time to time they do have a mind of their own and take over when you least expect it but the transition from sweet and docile to dominant and in charge was very smoothly done and definitely sexy. I'd be just like Subaru in awe and enjoying every second and it makes sense, he's waited so long for this moment never expecting it to happen and yet it is and in the most unbelievablly sexy way possible :)

Trust me there was nothing grotesque about it in any way.

Awww you're really just so sweet and that makes me happy but you are far too good of a writer to only have one reader and I'm very glad you that you don't.

Oh good I'm glad you found it. It was actually one of my friends who told me this... since I've been raving about this fic to her got her interested in the band and we've been watching all the vids and live clips together and now she's gone totally Royz. LOL

Date: 2013-01-22 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
You are just too sweet to me ;____; <3 I am so happy you think the transition works, and that it's still in keeping with the sensual tone I tried to set, and it really means the world to me<3

And good job, forging a new Royz fan :D (But then again; how can you not love them after you've seen them, and heard their music?<3) There can definitely never be too many of those~ But... to tell you the truth I kinda feel bad though, for the lack of Royz fics out there - and not just for the obvious reasons BECAUSE I NEED TO READ SOME ADSFUSFIUWFFKHAKJDSADSKLKHADHLA >________< -, but because mine is one of the only ones, which means people will have to settle with it XD; I feel kinda pressured, because I don't feel like it's good enough... ^^;

Kaoru's just amazing, and so stupidly handsome (especially without makeup~ jeez~)<3 And yes, they definitely will xD Because in fic heaven there are dublicates, yup, so Toshiya can also live forever sll happy-candy-laughing-in-the-skye with all the other pairings I want him to be in XD Yeees~ Oh, fic heaven<3

Date: 2013-01-22 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Okay, sorry, I know my last comment seems totally random at places, but I was answering it while looking in my inbox so I read both your replies (on this and the one on your fic) at the same time and just kinda... wrote out a reply for both in one without realizing XD; sorry~

Date: 2013-01-25 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
The neediness and impatience are so so sexy! And Koudai's move at the end - jesus, I died like ten times from that! It was SO HOT!!! oh my God, Subaru must be in heaven!

Roxy.

Date: 2013-01-25 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theblackmorals.livejournal.com
Haha, awww<3 I'm glad you liked it xD

And Subaru definitely is XD Totally awestruck and in Heaven~! But who wouldn't be?^___~

Thank you~ <3 ^-^

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