Wooow ... So lovely written somehow especially the well described details are sooo awesome sexy that the image in my mind can feel the glistering sensation among them ... Just like lil bits of lewd flashlights are passing on from one another between all three of them ... And the flashbacks into the recent past lets the storyline flying by like a smooth river is following slowly the tiny curves by adapting the nature like it have to be in reallife ... So over all it sounds like a fantasy is turning to reality for real ... I just love the flowing of your writing ... *dreaming like in heaven somehow* ...
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2012-06-21 11:01 pm (UTC)