Oh my god I think I'm in love with this. This is amazing and I love how detailed and 'poetic' it got. You wrote this so beautifully and detailed, the smut was written amazingly with some really outstanding lines. The fluff and everything at the end was to die for and I really can't believe this is only your second Jongkey fic ._.
Really looking forward to future Jongkey docs from you because they're written so well and I just love them *~*.